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Not bad for a first effort, but still needs a lot of work. There is the kernel of a good idea here - I like the concept of the Faustian pact - but the characters are not differentiated enough, and the writer needs to do more research to convince us he understands the workings of a political party, even a small one.
Overall rating: 
 
3.6
Ideas:
 
5.0
Research:
 
3.0
Writing style:
 
4.0
Title and subtitle:
 
3.0
Plot and pace:
 
4.0
Characters:
 
3.0
Dialogue:
 
4.0
Professionalism:
 
3.0
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Avatar Reviewed by Miles Taylor
October 15, 2008

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