http://www.thewritingcentre.com/ http://www.thewritingcentre.com/images/stories/ucf-logo.gif http://www.thewritingcentre.com/ http://www.thewritingcentre.com/component/jreviews/ I'm familiar with your book from another site, and another read through did not disappoint. You write with great insight, capturing character and atmosphere expertly. You manage to combine grittiness with descriptive interest in a way that leaves the reader wanting to learn more. Each chapter ending has an irresistible hook - pulling them into the next chapter. The subject matter is fascinating; the Bible Belt environment - something we are not familiar with in Britain. Your writing flows well, and dialogue is definitely one of your strengths. Technically, I found nothing to criticise, and I very much liked some of your images, like 'The cold night air was like a slap in the face'. I can find little to fault, and think this story will develop into an exciting thriller. Good luck with it. ]]> Vicky Twead Find a Writer 2009-05-25 19:56:28